经济学院金融学排名
亲爱的师哥师姐，请你们帮帮我，我现在特别焦虑，要是考不上公费，我就不打算读了．
我考３６０分经济学院金融学有可能公费吗？
此时心情真的无法用言语形容，苦苦挣扎一年，眼看到头了，谁知 there alawys something on my way which i cannot change by myself at all ,i don't wanna to let my parents come down,i don't wanna to make my parents live in bitter life anymore, my papa and mama just a couple who spent most of their life to strive for thier childern ,i cannot forgive myself if i still look upon then to afford my pastgraduate tution.
i knowsometimes i cannot change the arrange of the world ,poor or wealth,happy or misery,cheerful or sorrow ,while i still firmly believe budda will bless me anyway .
i think all the thing i can do is reading,reading,keep reading!
god will bless the one who helps themselves.
谢谢你们！ 对你深表同情，但提醒几个错误。
wanna=want to，所以wanna后不用加to;
my papa and mama后应加are;
tuition不是tution
arrange应改为arrangement;
poor or wealthy, happy or miserable, cheerful or sorrowful
i think all the thing i can do is reading,reading,keep reading!应改为
i think all the things that i can do are reading,reading,and keeping reading!
god will bless the one who helps themselves.应改为
god will bless the one who helps himself.
其他的连词也需要改！ 360公费有希望,就看你复试表现了
复试成绩占30-40%
感谢信
thanks for your attention.thanks for the kindhearted man who really help me .thanks for 斑主, just because there always somebody like you to help the poor guys who really need some help from others.i wish i can realize my dream !repay my parents !
thank you ,god bless you ! 真是能装，英语很好吗？ daode
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